Revised Summary & Pro.
I've finally gotten seriously started on my story. Lol. Since I skipped like all of December, I dared myself to write the whole prologue in one evening. Without further ado, here is the revised summary and the prologue, enjoy and leave comments!!
Summary
There are infinitely many ways to die, but to tell a truth to turn the one you love against you is the greatest death.
Vivara Gladomin, a seventeen-year-old rave DJ, who lives with her grandmother, Mina, is kotodama user along with Mina. Through the fickle power of speech, kotodama users are able to manipulate matter itself, within limits. A K-user’s purpose is to secure the veil between the human and demon worlds. Without the veil, demons would spread death and decay like fire in dry fields.
Over the centuries, humanity's worship of the existence of K-users has crumbled. Emperor Taelend and Empress Alyth, K-users themselves, reigned as arbitrary tyrants over the human realm, Kesvia, with droughts, famines, and quakes. After their deaths, the Taelend Empire was destroyed utterly by the population of Kesvia. Then, the devastatingly handsome Lord Rothir Jadek enters stage right while the peasants fawn over him and suggest that he take the throne in Auburn Rapids. As he flaunts around the capital, he issues blatantly false accusations against any and every kotodama user. Due to the persecution of K-users, their numbers are steadily decreasing, causing the unsupervised veil to tear at a rapid pace.
One drizzly afternoon, Vivi's grandmother is no where to be found in the decaying moss-covered Victorian mansion that has been in the Gladomin family for countless generations. A note on the cracking, dusty counter suggests foul play from beyond the veil. The mysterious appearance of a sensual, pale-skinned man at her DJ-ing gigs also has her on edge. Why is he always near? What are his intentions? Might he be linked to Mina's disappearance?
Prologue
Uncountable hours, possibly days, passed before the kotodama users realized they were losing. Though they could harness matter itself with just a word, it was a fickle power that activated half of the time it was called upon. To add to their dilemma, they were being cut down before they could utter a single syllable. The general, who was stationed at the back of the human force, noted the mounting problems. It was time to bring out their last battle strategy. He signaled the double lines of 10,000 support K-users to initiate Plan Veil. The line nodded, hoped their words would work, and said three words: “Amplify my voice.” A faint glow of aqua blue coned from each support K-user’s mouth. “Begin Plan Veil,” their amplified voices boomed in unison.
After the minute it took for this to transpire, the head of each trio gazed unseeingly ahead as they pronounced softly, “Seal. Make the Veil.” The battleground went silent. Demons screaming in agony could not hear themselves. Generals yelling orders for their soldiers to cut down the magically humans were unheard. With a sudden sound of ultimate, complete pain, a prodigious power greater than the first two waves of energy swarmed and pooled from every natural source of matter, including the leaders of the threesomes, as it was directed to the hundred yard strip of barren field by the soft spoken words of leading K-users. Visions grayed as every being present stared transfixed to the royal purple haze of power. Achingly slow, it began to stitch itself from the ground up as if an invisible being were knitting a wall. Time was meaningless. Eight hundred years or five seconds could have passed before any of them were aware of it. Finally, the nearly transparent purple-hued sparked in a blinding light was it solidified. The head of every trio fell to the ground face-first in death, having sacrificed themselves with their superior ability.
The Veil was a success. Forever sealing Kalisk from Kesvia...as long as it was renewed every year by K-users.
Comment ( 4 )
lol i guess that much is true XPmiss yajazz and i hate comment chats... lol
whoa...my birthday is also in march as well XD
wow not bad I love it XD....so did u get my message about black friday?
wonderful i wish i could writee a story but i am unimaginative so i will just stick to megaten ahh how i love megaten
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