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Adventures of Paz (This is my first time to write a story :P)

Category: Default Game: World of Warcraft Posted on Jun 02, 2009 11:47 pm


This is my new blog .Im going to write something first .I want to tell a story..The story is based on world of warcraft. but english is not my mother tongue,please excuse my poor writing XD.
Episode 1:
Since Paz had a hard time escaping from his father , he found a place to take some rest and take out the pearl incidentally.

“how big it is!. I suppose it can be traded for a lot of candies.

“Paz,what are you doing?” Donnar comes here and slaps Paz’s head.” “did you steal anything from your daddy?”

“heh..uncle donnar,. Are you better now? my dad was forcing me to practice lightning bolt again,it was just now he broke our last bowl with his crappy stick !!

“and then you just pried the pearls off the staff?hehe” “Donnar pinched his nose “return it, this is your dad’s precious staff”

“but…uncle Donnar.. I have no candy now!.”

After dinner.Paz sat in front of the door, there came his father’s coughing.

“Dad,why do u always cough? It seems all of our villagers except Uncle Donnar are stronger than you ,including me!”

“you little brat, you know nothing!.although Im not good at fighting,Your Dad is still a honorable shaman.… Most of our orcs are strong, However, there are still some of them weak in physique but excellent in spirit.Im one of those people...

“is it true Daddy? But I always think you are one of those who neither excellent in spirit nor strong in physique!

“don’t interrupt me!” A blush flashes across his green face “Since these orcs have physical problem,they could not fight at the front,but they could cast powerful spell with their staffs or heal our brave soldiers' wounds at the army’s rear

“but father… are you going to say the powerful magic is the small lightning which can do nothing but break the bowl to make us eat with wooden basin?
To be continue....

comments ( 2 )

liaojianghong
Post Time : Jun 04,2009 12:10 am

lol!his son is lovely and frank!!!

Aessina replied at 5:04 am Jun 04,2009
lol
Tangdoo
Post Time : Jun 03,2009 11:31 pm

(^_^) You must like to write =] It's not perfect, yet but keep writing, you can only get better. I would like to suggest when you start out with a the story, start with an introduce that sets the setting of the story and if possible fill in the reader with any key elements or background info before they begin their story. And one more thing, the more description/detail the better. I don't like to write much.... but when I do, I like to write mini anime scripts for fun and would be satisfy if I could get one reader to laugh. =] If you like, check up my collection at my blog. byebye.

Aessina replied at 5:03 am Jun 04,2009
Thanks for your suggestions, I will definitely check out ur blog,XD